You are as strong as a peaceful nation
You are as strong as a peaceful nation
Yet you find yourself in argument.
The world will learn to stand in your war.
Little girl. My strong willed daughter
-will you walk with a humble body
to see and to hear others before yourself
Little girl, my daughter
you were born a warrior.
I cannot change your path.
Burn the city and plunder
their dogs into sound
Little girl with the existence
inside of you, born and reborn,
little guru. The world in anger
continues to spawn disparity.
Will you enlace the master in equality
to teach him the answer or will you force him
to drink the aftermath of your slaughter
as he did to your ancestors
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I like where this one’s going, but it feels unfinished.
…born and reborn,
little guru.
This ode is strong, and shouldn’t taper off like it does.
It needs a punch-in-the-gut prayer finish.
…The world in anger
continues to spawn disparity.
And then the last lines fall kind of flat.
They shout rewrite me! or at least continue the thought through to WHY the master must answer to new paradigms.
I digggit!